Renascence Characters Storyline Sketches Images

Deleterious
Page 1  
Panel 1  
  A snow covered mountain peak. Some Russian
Page 2  
Panel 1  
  DragonFist meditating above the ground with hands out and his sword hovering above them. It's just after midday.
Panel 2  
  DragonFist meditating above the ground with hands out and his sword hovering above them. The sun is sarting to set you can see small wisps of his breath.
Panel 3  
  DragonFist meditating above the ground with hands out and his sword hovering above them. It's night now, you can clearly see his breath and some steam rising off of his body.
Page 3  
Panel 1  
  DragonFist opens his eyes and the sword begins to dissolve. Still night.
Panel 2  
  As DragonFist stands there looking up as a shooting star streaks by.
Panel 3  
  Star streaks towards the ground in front of DragonFist and seems to land in the woods below.
Panel 4  
  DragonFist heads towards the crash site.
Page 4  
Panel 1  
  Arrives just in time to see a black van go screeching off.
Panel 2  
  Looks at trees and notices some scorching of leaves.  
  Panel 3  
  Calls HQ and says he's going to need some assistance.  
  Panel 4  
  Streak and Morning Star arrive in an unmarked van.
Morning Star: "Going our way?"
Page 5  
Panel 1  
  Looking through windshield into van. Streak on right, Morning Star on left, DragonFist in back. Morning Star has a Happy Troll bag on lap.
Morning Star: "What's da emergence?"
DragonFist: "Evil is loose."
Panel 2  
  Same view...Morning Star is eating a Happy Troll burger.
Morning Star: "What's dat spose to mean?"
DragonFist: "That I don't know the identity just the nature. I'm sure all will be revealed soo enough."
Panel 3  
  Same view...Morning Star is eating another Happy Troll burger.
Morning Star: "As long as we get to smack up some evil, soon."
DragonFist: "By night's end evil your appetite will be assuaged."
Panel 4  
  Same view...Morning Star is done eating...
Morning Star: "Hey, while we're out any chance we can stop and grab a bite to eat?"
Page 6  
Panel 1  
  View from behind DragonFist looking out windshield sky is starting to lighten.
Morning Star: "We ain't gonna find nothin'. It's almost mornin' and we ain't done jack."
DragonFist: "Patience my rotund compatriot, evil is close."
Panel 2  
  Same view except a body is falling towards hood.
Morning Star: "Huh!?!"
Panel 3  
  View of van swirving into light pole with body on it.
Panel 4  
  DragonFist, Morning Star and Streak stumbling out of van looking up.
Looking at Morning Star, DragonFist: "...very close."
Page 7  
Panel 1  
  Looking up a skyscraper where a shattered window can be spotted at the penthouse.
Page 8  
Panel 1  
  View of DragonFist, M and S on the street, van in the background.
DragonFist hovering off the ground.
DragonFist: "Morning Star, Streak up the stairs, I'll take the Window"
Panel 2  
  Morning Star and Streak running up stairs, Streak is way ahead.
Morning Star: "I hate the stairs, why don't we ever take the elevator?"
"Hey streak, wait up!"
Panel 3  
  DragonFist floating in through the window...
Panel 4  
  Streak at top of stairs smoking a cigarette while watching Morning Star run up the stairs.
Page 9  
Panel 1  
  DragonFist walking through a luxury apartment with blood splattered on the walls.
Panel 2  
  Turns the corner and there on the wall are pinned four men, spread eagle with their guts torn out.
Creature can be seen in the upper area. Sword starts to materialize in hand.
DragonFist: "Lord Hades walks among us..."
Panel 3  
  Creature claws into DragonFist
Panel 4  
  DragonFist wrestling with Creature.
Page 10  
Panel 1  
  Creature knocks DragonFist into wall
Panel 2  
  Door is kicked open and Morning Star marches in, streak sneaks in behind him.
Panel 3  
  Creature throws 3 spikes into Morning Star pinning him against the wall.
Panel 4  
  Creature facing a pinned Morning Star, Streak standing behind Creature.
Page 11  
Panel 1  
  Streak taps Creature on shoulder
Panel 2  
  Creature turns to look, Streak moves behind him and frees Morning Star.
Panel 3  
  Creature turns back towards Morning Star
Panel 4  
  Morning Star is clobbering Creature.
Page 12 & 13  
  Creature goes flinging backwards from Morning Star's punch, lands in a 3-point stance.
Creature pounces on Morning Star tearing into him.
Streak knocks Creature off of Morning Star.
Creature escapes Streak grabbing Streak's arm, breaking it and kicking him against a column, unconscious.
Morning Star grads Creature in bear hug.
Creature scratches Morning Star's face.
Morning Star throws Creature at wall, Creature acrobats off and lands.
Creature throughs more spikes at Morning Star.
Morning Star goes down in a heap.
Page 14  
Panel 1  
  Creature standing triumphant over everyone decloaks.
DragonFist's eyes are now open in the background.
Panel 2  
  DragonFist stands and faces the creature. Sword materializing in hand.
DragonFist: "Greetings Hades. Have you had enough death or do you wish for more?"
Panel 3  
  DragonFist and Creature still facing off, Creature eyeing DragonFist up inquisitively. DragonFist: "How about you surrender and we all go home?"
"Any chance? Nah, didn't think so."
Panel 4  
  Creature lunging at DragonFist
DragonFist sidestepping and slashing off Creature's arm with sword.
Page 15  
Panel 1  
  Creature's arm respawns.
DragonFist: "A worthy demon, good."
Panel 2  
  Creature charges again, this time ducking low to avoid the sword and slashing the side of DragonFist.
Panel 3  
  Creature charges again, this time jumping high and landing on top off DragonFist, knocking him down.
Panel 4  
  Creature on top of DragonFist, sneering.
Page 16  
Panel 1  
  DragonFist kicks Creature off.
Panel 2  
  Creature charges again
Panel 3  
  DragonFist begins lightning bolt between hands
Panel 4  
  DragonFist fries Creature
Page 17  
Panel 1  
  DragonFist standing over a charred mark on the floor.
Streak and Morning Star are just getting up.
Cop lights outside.
DragonFist: "Boys in blue are here, time to become scarce."
Page 18  
Panel 1  
  News commentator
Gil: "Tonight's top story, Death from Above"
Panel 2  
  News...
"Kao Saban, suspected Triad lord along with his bodyguards were found murdered in his downtown Penthouse early this morning."
Panel 3  
  News...
"Three individuals were spotted by witnesses fleeing the premices as the police arrived, but no one could give a detailed description of these killers."
Panel 4  
  News...
"In other news, several youths were found dead in an alley this morning from seizures. Aparently, they were victims of some bad SimChips. This is Gil ... and that's news to me."



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